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Wednesday, April 29, 2020
Writing A Dangerous Pet
My king father gave me a Dragon on my
5th birthday. the Ayman kingdom it was surrounded
by different kingdom.
My father kingdom was a powerful ally with the
dragon the one I received. the king wants Me
To be a good friend and ally of the dragon, because
some day we gonna rule the kingdom the of my father.
I will call my dragon Hayabusa and i will feed a
lamb shoulder to become a more stronger.
By: Ayman Luague
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Hi Ayman,
ReplyDeleteWell done on your writing, its lovely to see. You would be a very good leader of a Kingdom. Great idea on feeding your Dragon a lamb shoulder so he would become stronger. Where did you get the name Hayabusa for you Dragon from? What other things happen in your Kingdom?
Hi Ayman
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing a story on your blog. I love the name of your dragon. Do you like lamb shoulders to eat like your dragon?
Miss Smith-Palmer
Hi Ayman,
ReplyDeleteI think I would need some training before I could have a dragon for a pe. Your dragon is going to be useful as an ally for your kingdom.
Mrs Roach